torstai 9. elokuuta 2012

Poem on progress





For our last meeting I did this poem.




The advice I got, was to make the background darker, because it is about a stormy weather. Well, here:



Still, it has to have something, that draws your eye to the work, so I placed a bird Sterna paradisaea,
what do you think, is it too big?











1 kommentti:

  1. I relly like the bird and text and the composition! Very wee done, maarit! Is it for sale?

    VastaaPoista